The incest was fine to me but the way this was written makes it hard to care about the MC. He had so many chances to learn from the pain he put his older brother from and just kept getting worse. I agree with the person that said this would be better suited as a tragedy. It had potential but the ending just wasn't satisfying. If the older brother loves him back it would have been nice to see them share more good moments but everything was just possessiveness, abuse, and manipulation.
The incest was fine to me but the way this was written makes it hard to care about the MC. He had so many chances to learn from the pain he put his older brother from and just kept getting worse. I agree with the person that said this would be better suited as a tragedy. It had potential but the ending just wasn't satisfying. If the older brother loves him back it would have been nice to see them share more good moments but everything was just possessiveness, abuse, and manipulation.