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Another rushed climax

Koybito May 25, 2024 4:09 pm

I’m not sure why so many authors don’t pace out the climax of a series. Obvi, we were all waiting for that monster to get got, and it kinda happens maybe in a few frames of a gun and getting stabbed in the neck? Like, after all of MC’s pain and suffering, literally watching him get raped for multiple chapters, 3 images is all we get and boom we’re in the hospital and it all over?

Happened in Pearl Boy too. We get basically endless torture of the MC, and then a few quick panels and it’s happily ever after. After so much build up, tension, and straight up stress, it feels like somewhat a let down. I’m not saying I want to see chapters of the bad guy getting tortured, but it just seems like a rushed, mostly “off screen” mess.

Responses
    Ur welcome May 25, 2024 9:01 pm

    This is how a lot of authors are with rape fetish.
    The revenge is either short and rushed, and or forgive and forget.
    At least I can finally drop this story