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Uhm this story is not as amazing as I thought it would be.
The amazing part ended when the real antagonist revealed themselves and both Richard and Caleb’s character development plummeted into shit. I truly believe that the author failed on showing how richard fell in love with caleus bc i just don’t see it.
Caleus is a rapist and his character is poorly written.
Richard stop loving Daphne only like 5 chapters before the story ends.
The resolution of the time traveling problem ended like a rushed shouen manga battle.
Richard and caleus as a couple feels one sided and the extras doesn’t really help.
They also made the emperor and the duke get together but i wished that was explored MORE.
I find it funny that Enoch barely appeared in the story. I think he was just a gag character.
I didn’t read the rest of the extras bc I was already loosing interest.
dang really... that's disappointing as hell
What a waste of potential.. if possible I hope the artist would change how the story proceeds but idk if there's a contract thing that prevents that.
The artist has had changed a whole lot from the novel. I do hope they change the ending too.
So there's still hope! Praying the artist saves this story!
I don't read novel but after reading 25 chapters of this manhwa I feel that Richard never love Daphne he just think he loves her because in his dark life she is only person who care and love him without any selfish reasons and always there for him so when she died he felt depressed and angry because she is his whole world (▰˘◡˘▰)
Wait omg where did you read the full novel?
This is the author’s first work! She expressed that there were indeed a lot of immature aspects but she’s now working closely with the artist to fix some stuff :>
Im pretty bummed about the novel too TT im placing all my hope that they’ll change most of the story
I think so too. It’s just the fact that they dragged this way too long in the novel, which made his relationship with caelus rushed
Ok thank god. Maybe the ending will be better
Scroll through the comics and there’s a link
Ohh if that happened than i would say this concept is really good but the execution are too bad maybe it ruins the whole story any development. Is I'm right as you read u know batter.
There’s people in the comment section who are on guwon’s side or his rules.
Do yall not think about how mentally draining it is for a person to live there knowing that guwon killed their loved ones in order to get the people he think is useful?
Did ya’ll even read the chapter properly?
I’m glad the author took this route because there’s NEEDS TO BE some changes with the town, y’all need to think realistically instead of thinking about guwon and teach fucking.
I mean if I we’re on Teach’s shoes, I totally would side Guwon, the man is devoted to me and this is the apocalypse we’re talking about, you bet your ass my survival instinct would kick in and I would attach myself to the President of the Apocalypse who happens to be madly in love with me and would destroy the world to keep me safe
I’m grateful that teach isn’t like you then. The man actually has character instead of just being a lovesick dicksick fool.
This story would of been shit if the teach sees the father getting killed by guwon for saving his son for some medicine and teach be like, “Oh well, I can’t wait to see guwon tonight so he can fuck me”.
They weren’t forced to come. If they chose to join the community then they should just live their lives, especially after being given a second chance and follow the fucking rules. They’d already be six feet under if it weren’t for Guwon and the hounds!
I mean it’s the apocalypse with zombies running around, survival would be my #1 priority
Forced to come?
Ever heard of pressure, shock, or fear
Ever heard of flight, fight, fawn, freeze?
During a situation where you either die with your loved ones or survive due to the person that kill them, no person will think rationally.
Stop trying to paint the town people as evil
So you’ll be fine if guwon killed your parents or your loved ones that you been together for all your lives and be mentally ok living your daily live in the safe Heaven. You would be alright seeing guwon killing children and innocent people bc “oh it’s the apocalypse it’s killed or be killed anyways”
Man, I feel like I’m arguing with children
They could kill themeselves later on and join their dead family???!!! If they haven’t, then that means they wanna live and if they’ve not died of hunger or disease yet that’s all thanks to Guwon and his men! You don’t bite the hands that feed you , especially when you’re helpless af!
LOL its fiction, you need to learn how to chill it’s not that deep