Uhm this story is not as amazing as I thought it would be.
The amazing part ended when the real antagonist revealed themselves and both Richard and Caleb’s character development plummeted into shit. I truly believe that the author failed on showing how richard fell in love with caleus bc i just don’t see it.
Caleus is a rapist and his character is poorly written.
Richard stop loving Daphne only like 5 chapters before the story ends.
The resolution of the time traveling problem ended like a rushed shouen manga battle.
Richard and caleus as a couple feels one sided and the extras doesn’t really help.
They also made the emperor and the duke get together but i wished that was explored MORE.
I find it funny that Enoch barely appeared in the story. I think he was just a gag character.
I didn’t read the rest of the extras bc I was already loosing interest.
dang really... that's disappointing as hell
What a waste of potential.. if possible I hope the artist would change how the story proceeds but idk if there's a contract thing that prevents that.
The artist has had changed a whole lot from the novel. I do hope they change the ending too.
So there's still hope! Praying the artist saves this story!
I don't read novel but after reading 25 chapters of this manhwa I feel that Richard never love Daphne he just think he loves her because in his dark life she is only person who care and love him without any selfish reasons and always there for him so when she died he felt depressed and angry because she is his whole world (▰˘◡˘▰)
Wait omg where did you read the full novel?
This is the author’s first work! She expressed that there were indeed a lot of immature aspects but she’s now working closely with the artist to fix some stuff :>
Im pretty bummed about the novel too TT im placing all my hope that they’ll change most of the story
I think so too. It’s just the fact that they dragged this way too long in the novel, which made his relationship with caelus rushed
Ok thank god. Maybe the ending will be better
Scroll through the comics and there’s a link
Ohh if that happened than i would say this concept is really good but the execution are too bad maybe it ruins the whole story any development. Is I'm right as you read u know batter.
So he sell out his team. No wonder someone is trying to kill him.
i totally agree and hanrim is so valid for being angry at him… but caring so deeply about your teammate’s health, wellbeing, and future that you’d rather see your whole team lose than something happening to him is sooooo romantic i’m sorry
Frrrr ╥﹏╥
I wonder if they’d still be mad if they knew why. I mean, are they really willing to destroy their teammates career just so they can have one? I don’t know if anyone has the right to be angry about that, especially if they HAD no future in baseball without him.
It is.
Nah, the team were ass. If they woldnt have made it without the ml sacrificing his body/health they should stop acting so entitled. It’s understandable to be upset at the moment it happened because they’re just teenagers, but to hold onto something so dumb and childish well into adulthood…
Is this new fuck up character is the author making fun if the people who thought haruki was bottom?
That’s what it feels like
Uh, why didn’t J have white hair in the past when he met LS?
I’m pretty sure in the novel he had white hair when he awakened?
If I'm not mistaken, nope. There is an explanation about his white hair, and he would have had them only after his return from the rift.
It's an important plotpoint that's going to be explained later in the novel, don't worry, you'll see a lot of white-haired J
They took a chunk out of the hyunjae x yoojin scenes in this chapter.
Go on asura scans or the translation team website of the manwha and go down to the comments. Someone posted stuff of the missing material of this chapter.
I don’t like guwon. I don’t’ think he’s any different than the tops who rapes their bottom (not saying he rapes teach btw). Instead he just kills innocent people who aren’t necessary for his home and I think that’s the problem with this story especially if it’s ending where the teach will end up loving him in the future.
The doc families and the other people families in that town didn’t need to die, like guwon could have just taken the people he needed and spare the ones he didn’t but he just kills them instead. Children even.
Maybe he’ll be redeem if teach changes his mind? But even if that’s possible it still doesn’t change the pain and suffering he caused others. If this story was really good, I think the teach and guwon should separated.
I don’t understand why people discuss morality in a fucking apocalyptic world.
The rule inside of the town is simple… plus using medicine that is probably scarce to save a children instead of saving it for the ones that look for food for me isn’t a bad idea and I’m even a teacher and I’ve a lot of respect for kids…
But it’s the end of the world.::
I stand with Guwon hahaha
This is such a refreshing take on guwon's character. I only ever see people criticize teach but never guwon
The medicine thing isn’t the problem (although I think the punishment of death is wrong), it’s the way he recruits people to his home.
It’s hard to not put my morals on to this story when he kills people that he doesn’t need. The doctor has every right to take his revenge bc his wife and child got killed. Guwon could have just taken the doctor and not killed them but he didn’t other than the fact that they’re not useful for his home.
I’m sorry I don’t romanticize a psychopathic character like you do
I’m surprised people criticize the teach?
I think the reason for that is bc they’re trying to make teach be a bad guy and not an innocent victim, so they can easily ship him and guwon together.
I don't think it is fair to criticize Guwon for lacking social qualities of a human. I doubt Guwon is human. He does not seem to understand concepts like pain from grief. He understands pain from hunger, injury or being sick but not because you lost someone or the meaning of family members or what social bonds are, why people have friends . No one ever told him about it either. There is no malice behind his actions but ignorance.
Maybe teach will be the way for him to understand it. But it is not like he decided to be this way and knows the emotional pain he causes to others.
On the contrary, I don’t romanticize him. Because I’m not standing on how amazing he is or glorifying his behavior. I agree the doctor is allowed to seek revenge but I don’t think Guwon is moved by morality or social constructs but survival of the strongest (mentally, physically). Whatever bring stability or something to the colony.
Aside from that for me the hounds are worst than Guwon since they’ve showed lack of empathy, they have betrayed each other and that for me shows a deeper level of evilness than Guwon so far (with others not with Teach).
That’s why my comment but sure
Is that a good excuse for his actions though? Because he’s not human or doesn’t know right from wrong?
Even if teach teaches him all of that is still doesn’t change the pain he causes for others.
I can’t tell where the direction of this story will going, but if there’s a way he’ll change his rules or have a bit of human decency in the future then maybe…MAYBE I’ll find him likable.
If the author is just going to keep him as a psychopath and not learn from his mistakes then he’s not that much different than other BL psychopaths that tend to be written poorly.
Huh?
The HOUNDS are worse than guwon? Please just ask yourself how many people in their town had their loved ones killed to be in the town whether it’s by force or not? Or who made the rules of the town which if you break any of them it’s execution no other punishment except for that?
Mind you, the hounds are guwon’s servants and he designed them to be that. Guwon must of known of their actions but didn’t care bc they’re just like him. Please put aside his interactions with teach and focus on the characters around him.
Guwon is not psychopath. Psychopath knows the pain they cause and do it anyway. How could Guwon know what humans consider right and wrong? How could he even realize that killing a person causes emotional pain to those who were close to the deceased. He has no such concept. What matters is how he reacts once he learns this.
His actions are completely rational if you do not recognize emotional pain and only care about efficiency and physical wellbeing while completely ignoring any social and psychological needs.
There’s people in the comment section who are on guwon’s side or his rules.
Do yall not think about how mentally draining it is for a person to live there knowing that guwon killed their loved ones in order to get the people he think is useful?
Did ya’ll even read the chapter properly?
I’m glad the author took this route because there’s NEEDS TO BE some changes with the town, y’all need to think realistically instead of thinking about guwon and teach fucking.
I mean if I we’re on Teach’s shoes, I totally would side Guwon, the man is devoted to me and this is the apocalypse we’re talking about, you bet your ass my survival instinct would kick in and I would attach myself to the President of the Apocalypse who happens to be madly in love with me and would destroy the world to keep me safe
I’m grateful that teach isn’t like you then. The man actually has character instead of just being a lovesick dicksick fool.
This story would of been shit if the teach sees the father getting killed by guwon for saving his son for some medicine and teach be like, “Oh well, I can’t wait to see guwon tonight so he can fuck me”.
They weren’t forced to come. If they chose to join the community then they should just live their lives, especially after being given a second chance and follow the fucking rules. They’d already be six feet under if it weren’t for Guwon and the hounds!
I mean it’s the apocalypse with zombies running around, survival would be my #1 priority
Forced to come?
Ever heard of pressure, shock, or fear
Ever heard of flight, fight, fawn, freeze?
During a situation where you either die with your loved ones or survive due to the person that kill them, no person will think rationally.
Stop trying to paint the town people as evil
So you’ll be fine if guwon killed your parents or your loved ones that you been together for all your lives and be mentally ok living your daily live in the safe Heaven. You would be alright seeing guwon killing children and innocent people bc “oh it’s the apocalypse it’s killed or be killed anyways”
Man, I feel like I’m arguing with children
They could kill themeselves later on and join their dead family???!!! If they haven’t, then that means they wanna live and if they’ve not died of hunger or disease yet that’s all thanks to Guwon and his men! You don’t bite the hands that feed you , especially when you’re helpless af!
LOL its fiction, you need to learn how to chill it’s not that deep