If she’s trying to do an excellent redemption arc it better be no backstory (where jk saw his parents die, or he was bullied, or whatever cliché toxic top backstory); No cat and mouse game ( jk chases after Dan and Dan keeps running away from him)
And most importantly no 180 degree change (like jk realizing he have feelings for doc Dan and he instantly starts being nice to Dan by trying to make him like him (basically nothing like beware of the march) ) I doubt the author would do this but who knows.
The redemption arc should be instead focus on self healing, for instance, GOING TO FUCKING THERAPY TO DEAL WITH YOUR ANGER ISSUES. Apologizing to co workers who he treated like shit. Should be couple of chapters of that and maybe a time skip where he goes to Dan,idk.
Bc truly nothing, I mean NOTHING, can convince me of jk redemption. The author reallllly need to tried to separate from the other authors if she’s trying to make her readers (that don’t like jk) like jk
Also if anyone asking why I’m reading this story, it’s bc of the side couple. Without them INSTANT DROP.
Just like the title I’m dropping this story. Let’s be honest, we all know how’s this is gonna end where the mc is gonna end up with Mr. Rickey, even though he killed his brother and burn down the neighbourhood/town.
His brother didn’t deserve this. I bet that poor kid died from suffocation all by himself crying for his brother ╥﹏╥
Illay from Passion is up there as a black flag top and I thought he’s the worst of the worst. However, this bastard officially takes his position. How fucking psychotic you have to be to burn a fucking hospital down and a town? How many patients at the hospital died bc of that? How many people lost their homes and have officially become homeless bc of that?
If I continue this story, I will get extremely disgusted by the mc falling for Mr. Dickity, Fuckity, Bastardity, Ihopeyoufuckingdiety.
Feel free to message me if I’m wrong about the ending.
Snake guy was sus from the beginning. The last few panels we could read Risky's thoughts and he was pretty positive. If my memory serves me well snake guy said something weird few chaps back.
I think this is gonna be a big misunderstanding. Mc attacks risky cuz of fire, risky attacks back thinking mc wants his position and marks mc
And snake guy will have a big laugh and probably aims for that position himself.
I understand that they were both traumatized by the accident which is why the sister left the bottom and the brother keeps raping him, however this doesn’t justify their actions.
If I were in the bottom position, I’d probably just off myself knowing that I’ll continue to loose my memories, knowing I was abandoned by my lover, and living in captivity with my rapist who was like family.
I reallllly hope the author takes the serious route instead of making the bottom develop some Stocklhm Syndrome and stays with the brother. However, knowing these types of stories, it’s gonna turn out like that,
I see a lot of people of sugarcoating their relationship.
This story is very similar to sadistic beauty side story where a lot of people don’t like, but I guess this story is fine bc it’s sexual assault not physical abuse, right?