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PmChivas June 23, 2024 7:40 pm

The story starts off really strong, but it starts to fizzle and get convoluted as Ze gets closer to the village in his dreams. Honestly, I think this story needed about 30 more chapters to fully flesh it out. I needed more information about the deaths and why the astronomers died in succession and its importance. How the shadow moved? Why his parents hid everything. I just wanted more...more fleshed out motives instead of weird ending. Also did MC maintain his powers?? So much left to explain and explore.

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    Gabbie August 2, 2026 1:38 pm

    The story is more of social inuendos and cryptic messages, that you'd have to figure it out like a puzzle, yes it's missing some information on the astronomers, but the parents didn't really hide it from him, when he was a baby he knows where he must go and his mother's kindness snapped him out of the God's influence. I think that's when he forgot and tried to live for his family. He did not maintain his powers as every wish and monster disappeared, that's why the god said "you were made of flesh and blood , you were different from me from the very beginning" which means he can live as a human.