There are so many of us complaining about this one... which goes to show how much potential it had... but they took a decent start in world building and trashed it for... what? omg what did the mc wait so long for, is he really going to confess at this point? Please, no....Ten chapters ago he could have run off to another country and the author could have made the king really work for it, but no... Hell, they could have had the ml waver and have feelings for the aide, or put in a powerful female mage in the mix or something, *anything* to actually have real tension in the plot.
There are so many of us complaining about this one... which goes to show how much potential it had... but they took a decent start in world building and trashed it for... what? omg what did the mc wait so long for, is he really going to confess at this point? Please, no....Ten chapters ago he could have run off to another country and the author could have made the king really work for it, but no... Hell, they could have had the ml waver and have feelings for the aide, or put in a powerful female mage in the mix or something, *anything* to actually have real tension in the plot.