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Ok so i didn't read your full comment only the first 2 paragraphs and all I'll say is it has this whole back and forth type of thing like where the plot progressing then it's regresses also I don't like how Mc assumes that landshire(I think that's how you spell his name) doesn't really love her just bc he's a little immature and how she thinks denying him for trivial reasons is helping him ╮(￣▽￣)╭
I'm at chapter 10 and it just doesn't feel like its going to get any better
I was curious abt this because of the artstyle (ik shallow reason) but i dont think the artstyle can save this dogshit storyline
Things i hate from what i've observed:
-ML is childish, it feels like FL is constantly babysitting. The story already explained why he's like that,,, but ehh
-ML is oblivious and FL's parents can't take no for an answer. This is what i hate the most, they treat her like a trial that they can win over if they keep trying. I mean, perseverance is a great trait but a no is still a no. Its selfish of her parents to keep pushing her when she's already rejected the idea multiple times.
-FL needs to get married to inherit the title. I genuinely don't get it. FL has shown that she is capable and qualified, but the big deciding factor for inheriting the tile is marriage? Even if it was the system of their kingdom, (it might be but idrk) can't her parents retire and make her the acting lord for now? She's done it for about a year idk why they can't let her
Things i hate based on my opinion (has nothing to do with the storyline feel free to agree or disagree):
-FL says she likes handsome men, but is crushing on the ML,,, like idk girl he's really not all that ahahaha...
-The comedy bit isn't clicking w me,,,, idk why