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For the bite scene I do feel like it suits the character but I also wanted him to be more ...

Lani May 10, 2025 1:52 am

For the bite scene I do feel like it suits the character but I also wanted him to be more rough and lose control. Like I felt like this was too calculated to be instinctual. He’s fighting with his instincts usually, so I was expecting more bites or a deeper bite. Not the little hickey type. But we made it finally

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    LOSTSOUL May 11, 2025 4:30 am

    Righttt? I love this but it's not enough... This is making me feel like re-reading some YAOI Omegaverse with wild sex and biting

    Lani May 11, 2025 4:17 pm
    Righttt? I love this but it's not enough... This is making me feel like re-reading some YAOI Omegaverse with wild sex and biting LOSTSOUL

    Crying but I agree

    Octavia34 July 22, 2026 9:32 am
    Righttt? I love this but it's not enough... This is making me feel like re-reading some YAOI Omegaverse with wild sex and biting LOSTSOUL

    Can't say I was too terribly surprised considering just how extremely vanilla the sex was the entire time. Despite the "primal" build up, the author just seems to lack the ability to do any that isn't plainly vanilla.