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Ugh

Moonloverss November 13, 2025 9:24 pm

You feel seme's love but uke. It's hard to read this type of stories which has slut character. Bcs author should put more effort for us to see their love. I can see that seme loves him but uke's love looks insincere to me. He was like "I like fucking" 2 ch ago. After 2 ch, boom! "I like him".
How? You were fooling around while he waited for you. When did you fall for him?

Responses
    Kittichan November 15, 2025 6:46 pm

    I agree. This wasn’t as emotional as it could have been. The sx scenes that lasted for 3 chapters right after the argument they had in chapter 15 (which lasted for one chapter) felt lackluster. I honestly think there should have been more angst before they forgave each other so easily. Or even more buildup into finding out that his landlord turns into a dog. It goes like “this happened!!” then straight to “it did?! Okay- anyways… let’s fxck” the pacing just feels too quick and awfully awkward, imo. Which makes it feel like not much of an emotional connection is building up between the two. Anywho, I’m dropping this, stopped at chapter 21. It’s okay for what it is, but not my cup of tea. To each their own.