Omg I agree! I came to read this stpry because I saw that funeral scene and I was like ooh so kinda like second couple loss, complex story and after reading it....meh I will say the second pairing is suited for each other, they can dance together in hell lol but apart from that, the story is a bit...underwhelming
Totally agree, that was just such a slop, total nonsense! Bunch of random ideas and toxic rapey teops pushed together and here we are... and seriously, making a friend a rapist, and later what, a potential love rival? No redemption? Wtf was that! Seriously, some should just stick to drawing and leave writing to people who can come up with a good story!
It honestly gives 2018 bad wattpad bl angst story
Seriously, even some Wattpad stories are better! People need to learn that the fact you have a nice artstyle, doesn't mean you should make series, because the main point in series is writing, artstyle is lile a secondary thing, but no, people are jumping at the easy money by releasing crappy series, and here we are, drawing in a wave of shitty stories!
I have no idea why this is rated as high as it is because it's not good. Adrian is the only interesting character, even his partner Kyle is just kind of a random lower class dude. There is a LOT of dubcon in the first part of the story, and later there's a character who rapes 2 different people (and is still a good guy.) Don't even get me started on the rest of the plot, which is full of loose ends and genuinely makes no sense. The point I lost it was when, more than halfway through the story, Adrian is suddenly revealed to be a fucking vampire. I'm sorry, I mean a ghoul... which drinks human blood, eats human flesh, and is horny all the time for some reason. So yeah, horny vampire cannibals. You'd think this would make the story more interesting but it really doesn't.