There’s such a thing as doing too much. This right here is a good example.
Real
have you literally not been reading the story and how jae has changed, which prob makes kd less nervous? you people are insufferable
so after 88 chapters of this yaoi you were like “actually no im really not a big fan of this”
Nah they have a point tho
I can't believe you really think what JK did is enough to make Kim Dam who he abused so bad that he found himself in such a state that he turned alcoholic and suicidal enough that he's suddenly isn't nervous???
I pointed out a fair point, the way Kim Dam's trauma is dealed with is awfully bad and makes the pacing of the story weird. As someone who went through abuse, who had a lot of friends who went through abuse too, your own rapist suddenly acting a bit kind won't make you all okay with him initiating sex or intimate acts without asking for consent first. Especially in this story in which it was shown that Kim Dam still reacted badly about JK trying to have sex with him and being all anxious about it.
I hope you're just one of those young teenagers who still hasn't a clue about healthy relationship (because that's what the author is trying to do in this fic) because if you're a grown ass adult, it's low-key scary for you to think what's happening in this story is fine
I always disliked how the author wrote this story, made servals comment about it, and much people reading this fic all complained about the awful writing. But we were all eagerly waiting for the redemption arc and how it would be deal with, I was just litteraly stating how bad it was going on (on the writing aspect of it).
You guys needs to fucking chill out and stop feeling attacked each time someone makes a well deserved criticism. It's the story that I'm criticism not the people reading it for fuck sake
It bugs me the way Jaekyung will still kiss/makes inappropriate touches towards Kim Dan without warning first. There's definitely a problem in the evolution of Kim Dan's trauma about all the rape stuff. Because at first he was absolutely scared of Jaekyung and from his touch, and even if he turned more "chill" and all kind towards Kim Dam, all the sexual stuff initiated had still been kind of non con. Like, he would pounce on Kim Dam, kissing him and leading to sex, but never once did he ask for his consent or even warned him before doing it.
Yet, Kim Dam suddenly is somehow fine with it when he was absolutely terrified some chapters ago, it makes no sense. Like, if Jaekyung really respected Kim Dam and wanted to truly helps him and get redeem, he should always ask consent first, makes his intent clear and not starting thing out of nowhere to not stir up a breakdown from mc.
But yeah, with how the author doesn't know how to write good relationship (yes, even writing a romance that starts at bad but that is supposed to get better through time) I shouldn't expecting much from her.