There are so many things wrong with this and I am an enjoyer of the ancient toxic yaoi texts, first off, you can’t sit there the whole time saying the mc has the mind and will of an alpha and let him be so teary and pathetic at the same time, if alphas are the elites in this world why can’t the mc fight, why did he never question or resist his situation in a way that resembles that elite mind set like seriously he’s just a fucking twink with a mean side eye.
Secondly I love me a stoic ml who has the whole ceo thing going on but tell me why he has the personality and communication skills of a hump happy brick wall, like he wears a suit even at home, there are times you show and times you tell, here in the case of the mls personality the author fell short on both
And moving on to my third complaint of the thousands marinating in my brain rn, the mc is 17, yeah whatever kinda Grody but not anything we haven’t seen before, it’s just the pure babifacation of the mc that confused me, like hes supposed to be a 17yr old alpha and the people around him at an ALL ALPHA SCHOOL mind you are supposed to buy it, so why is my vacuum taller than him? Is the ml just 8ft or something seriously idk it’s just genuinely crazy, the lack of knotting or actual deep dive into the omegaverse aspect just set the story up for a perfect redirection if they wanted to film a new mulan movie “femboy pretends to be masc, joins elite family bullshit, marries a looksmaxer in a Tjmax suit”
There are so many things wrong with this and I am an enjoyer of the ancient toxic yaoi texts, first off, you can’t sit there the whole time saying the mc has the mind and will of an alpha and let him be so teary and pathetic at the same time, if alphas are the elites in this world why can’t the mc fight, why did he never question or resist his situation in a way that resembles that elite mind set like seriously he’s just a fucking twink with a mean side eye.
Secondly I love me a stoic ml who has the whole ceo thing going on but tell me why he has the personality and communication skills of a hump happy brick wall, like he wears a suit even at home, there are times you show and times you tell, here in the case of the mls personality the author fell short on both
And moving on to my third complaint of the thousands marinating in my brain rn, the mc is 17, yeah whatever kinda Grody but not anything we haven’t seen before, it’s just the pure babifacation of the mc that confused me, like hes supposed to be a 17yr old alpha and the people around him at an ALL ALPHA SCHOOL mind you are supposed to buy it, so why is my vacuum taller than him? Is the ml just 8ft or something seriously idk it’s just genuinely crazy, the lack of knotting or actual deep dive into the omegaverse aspect just set the story up for a perfect redirection if they wanted to film a new mulan movie “femboy pretends to be masc, joins elite family bullshit, marries a looksmaxer in a Tjmax suit”