The author obviously has a direction they want the story to go in but in the pursuit of that they threw away any kind of semi though unreal logic, they saw a problem but instead of working through it and coming up with even a slightly believable solution they plowed through head first with a "I want it this way so the main characters have to deal with it" mindset and it SHOWS
What I mean is that as an author their ideas should be able to come to life but in the same they also have to work through it and create a sable foundation for actual world building, they are creating laws and rules out of thin air to support their wants for the story when they should have created background for said rules, instead they are throwing all of their weak ideas and troupes into a pot and serving it out half baked
All of this is killing me, mls dick is the size of the long headed penguin from Madagascar , as well as the mods and not to mention the authors obvious piss kink this shit is PEAK LMAO
The author obviously has a direction they want the story to go in but in the pursuit of that they threw away any kind of semi though unreal logic, they saw a problem but instead of working through it and coming up with even a slightly believable solution they plowed through head first with a "I want it this way so the main characters have to deal with it" mindset and it SHOWS
well they're the author for a reason
What I mean is that as an author their ideas should be able to come to life but in the same they also have to work through it and create a sable foundation for actual world building, they are creating laws and rules out of thin air to support their wants for the story when they should have created background for said rules, instead they are throwing all of their weak ideas and troupes into a pot and serving it out half baked