All of this is killing me, mls dick is the size of the long headed penguin from Madagascar , as well as the mods and not to mention the authors obvious piss kink this shit is PEAK LMAO
I love their dynamic, because at first glance the mc is reluctant towards the ml but if you actually watch how he acts and pampers the ml you can see how much he absolutely adores him no matter how much he says he doesn't, he's been whipped since the moment the ml kissed him wrapped in curtains, there is always that one couple where the old lady "hates" her husband but would also give her own life for him, and that's them yk
He’s an idiot but he’s HIS idiot
AHSBSBJDJDHXJNDHZJCJSJHDHJDNSHLSKDB MY BABIES ARE COMING BACKKKKKK
There are so many things wrong with this and I am an enjoyer of the ancient toxic yaoi texts, first off, you can’t sit there the whole time saying the mc has the mind and will of an alpha and let him be so teary and pathetic at the same time, if alphas are the elites in this world why can’t the mc fight, why did he never question or resist his situation in a way that resembles that elite mind set like seriously he’s just a fucking twink with a mean side eye.
Secondly I love me a stoic ml who has the whole ceo thing going on but tell me why he has the personality and communication skills of a hump happy brick wall, like he wears a suit even at home, there are times you show and times you tell, here in the case of the mls personality the author fell short on both
And moving on to my third complaint of the thousands marinating in my brain rn, the mc is 17, yeah whatever kinda Grody but not anything we haven’t seen before, it’s just the pure babifacation of the mc that confused me, like hes supposed to be a 17yr old alpha and the people around him at an ALL ALPHA SCHOOL mind you are supposed to buy it, so why is my vacuum taller than him? Is the ml just 8ft or something seriously idk it’s just genuinely crazy, the lack of knotting or actual deep dive into the omegaverse aspect just set the story up for a perfect redirection if they wanted to film a new mulan movie “femboy pretends to be masc, joins elite family bullshit, marries a looksmaxer in a Tjmax suit”
I wish the artist didnt make them so ugly :) but other than that it was cute, wish it was longer
dude
LMAO
Do any of y'all know if this has a novel? Cuz I am impatient asf
It doesn't, I was literally crashing out after I found out
This is the type of smut we need, not the kind that's built off of resistance and unwillingness, we need tension, lust, longing and intimacy, the reason sex scenes in so many chapters isn't an eye sore is because they do it RIGHT and the scenes seems to contribute to the main plot aswell instead of being injected into the setting to meet a quota, I love themmm, and If I ever get my hands on the author/ artist, they are getting their ass ate on sight (with consent ofc ;))
This should have been alot longer, we need to see their actual relationship dynamic, we need to see their actual marriage and if their bodies have also been altered by the transmigration so that either of them can carry a child, it was obvious that the ml wants a family with mc, not branching on those feelings is a loss for the overall rating of the story
The author obviously has a direction they want the story to go in but in the pursuit of that they threw away any kind of semi though unreal logic, they saw a problem but instead of working through it and coming up with even a slightly believable solution they plowed through head first with a "I want it this way so the main characters have to deal with it" mindset and it SHOWS
well they're the author for a reason
What I mean is that as an author their ideas should be able to come to life but in the same they also have to work through it and create a sable foundation for actual world building, they are creating laws and rules out of thin air to support their wants for the story when they should have created background for said rules, instead they are throwing all of their weak ideas and troupes into a pot and serving it out half baked