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Pacing

TangerineDove January 7, 2026 10:11 pm

I keep seeing comments complaining the pacing is too fast OR that it's taking forever so they're only gonna come back when more chapters are out. No shade to either camp I just think it's a bit silly that people can't even agree what to criticize about. Makes me think it's just a matter of personal taste, because from my perspective the pacing is absolutely fine. Tight on plot, tight on action, with plenty of comedic relief.

Anyways, FL is so hot and badass, I am super in love with her. I'm actually jealous of the ML that he's got such a bombshell. This story is so hilarious and heartwarming!

Responses
    Bijou January 9, 2026 3:21 pm

    Took the words right outta my mouth when you spoke abt the FL ٩(๑❛ᴗ❛๑)۶