I think the story is written okay I wish ml and cecile were game because at the beginning they fighting for their "love" for each other only for the ml to forget about her and fall for the fl (which makes me kind doubt his love for her) I wish he had like and internal fight with himself and questioning his love for both women instead of o I like fl now Goodbye cecile. On that note I do like cecile she barely did anything bad she just an immature woman and all her plans to get her ex fiance failed due to her being a side villain character and she did had some right to fight fl for the one she loved after all fl did kind steal her man and I do know it was because of her father but she still went along with it and I know she thinks her father doesn't lover her and he is money hungry (even after he he told her when she was young he treasure her) and she afraid of him she still went along with it and stole that girl man and didn't even apologize not to mention fl doesn't like the ml (yet)
Also fell like cecile was a stepping stone in the story she a victim in my opinion like imagine your fiance being stolen and you fight tooth and nail to get him back and you think he is also fighting tooth and nail only for you to find out he folded and throw you to the curb after everything also I don't like cecile father I feel like he could have gone differently the slapping situation in my opinion there was no need for a slap she barely said anything crazy he was the one who told ml to give up on her and then has the audacity to slap her when she thinks it all the fl doing and not telling her the part he played and they're broken engagement also she is still in love with her ex fiance that he drove away (which I kind get because the debt he had was to grand for that family to handle) I don't like how the author wrote the situation where she pulled a knife and finally gave up on the ml I feel like the fl punch her that hard was a bit much like I get she attacked her but I feel like this is where the slap should have been written I get that the fl mostly thinks logically instead of emotionally but I think cecile did it because of more heightened emotion of everyone telling her she can no longer be with the one she loved because of the fl and not because she spoiled also the duel and her expose herself as the white rose knight was unnecessary there was barely and excessive mischief if she was angry at the fact she got attacked that would have made more sense or that she trying to protect her dignity as a noble or as penalty since she no longer going to the police I doubt doing it for the ml since cecile was going to attack fl and not ml (and yeah he got hurt but cecile was remorseful about since you know she loves him) anyway that been a long enough tangent about cecile who not even the MC or someone important to the story Small tangent ml nephew is an unnecessary character and I even forget about his existence
I really like the fl she know what she wants and doesn't fall for ml after he starts being nice to her and start doing the bare minimum at the beginning of the story (tho she can be a bit of a Mary sue at times) I thought that she was going to have her own ml because the current one sucks anyway I wish we have more time with her just seeing her go about see her struggles a bit would be nice to so far she been to perfect other then her daddy issues moving on to that their relationship is interesting tho I think with some communication they be fine he cares and trained her so she could protect herself and be safe in case he couldn't I wonder why she thinks he hate her why would she think that instead of her thinking that she a mere useful pawn to him anyway I hope he plans workout and she lives somewhere nice (I know she going to fold for ml despite the fact she can do so much better)
The ml I dislike a bit he not bad but is to naive and incompetent and I do doubt his love for fl because he moved on to quickly for my taste to fl like he fought his ex fiance a couple times and saw she didn't care and fell in love with fl Their not much to his personality other then what he is doing with the fl and that he like horses and the because of his father he is an important character I wonder what he did before the fl was he just with cecile because despite his status being high than the fl he knows no one from nobility like where was he did he just spawned with cecile because he doesn't know anything and I know his brother was head of the family but usually both children get educated about nobility rules and important figures in case the older one dies (sad face I know)
And on to the fl dad he may be a side character in status but this is his story everything revolve around him and his future victory (unless they kill him off) his by far one of the most interesting characters he got a lot going for him like how did he be a low ranking noble with out him get caught? Where is his wife now or how did she die? How did the whole kingdom get cursed without him knowing? How come they did just kill him with such power? What he doing know? What his plan to save his kingdom? Not mention his relationship with the other character fl, ml, other hight noble, random commoners, and underground informant I feel like I'm sounding sarcastic I'm not he is by far at the center of the story make me wonder why we are following his daughter who could careless about the actual plot and is kind of oblivious like she has and idea of what going on but her plans are still to divorce and move away from her father not solve family and kingdom issues (yat maybe she we) Also does fl got some kind amnesia probably we don't even know when she was born I'm pretty sure her mother was the one to get executed you what I hope I'm wrong about that because imagine your man letting you get executed instead of you I wish there was like a plot twist where it was her mother all along and her dad died it not but it would have been a good plot twist anyway thank for reading my review wether you agreed or disagree or you just need to kill time here take anything for the road
I think the story is written okay I wish ml and cecile were game because at the beginning they fighting for their "love" for each other only for the ml to forget about her and fall for the fl (which makes me kind doubt his love for her) I wish he had like and internal fight with himself and questioning his love for both women instead of o I like fl now Goodbye cecile. On that note I do like cecile she barely did anything bad she just an immature woman and all her plans to get her ex fiance failed due to her being a side villain character and she did had some right to fight fl for the one she loved after all fl did kind steal her man and I do know it was because of her father but she still went along with it and I know she thinks her father doesn't lover her and he is money hungry (even after he he told her when she was young he treasure her) and she afraid of him she still went along with it and stole that girl man and didn't even apologize not to mention fl doesn't like the ml (yet)
Also fell like cecile was a stepping stone in the story she a victim in my opinion like imagine your fiance being stolen and you fight tooth and nail to get him back and you think he is also fighting tooth and nail only for you to find out he folded and throw you to the curb after everything also I don't like cecile father I feel like he could have gone differently the slapping situation in my opinion there was no need for a slap she barely said anything crazy
he was the one who told ml to give up on her and then has the audacity to slap her when she thinks it all the fl doing and not telling her the part he played and they're broken engagement also she is still in love with her ex fiance that he drove away (which I kind get because the debt he had was to grand for that family to handle)
I don't like how the author wrote the situation where she pulled a knife and finally gave up on the ml I feel like the fl punch her that hard was a bit much like I get she attacked her but I feel like this is where the slap should have been written I get that the fl mostly thinks logically instead of emotionally but I think cecile did it because of more heightened emotion of everyone telling her she can no longer be with the one she loved because of the fl and not because she spoiled also the duel and her expose herself as the white rose knight was unnecessary there was barely and excessive mischief if she was angry at the fact she got attacked that would have made more sense or that she trying to protect her dignity as a noble or as penalty since she no longer going to the police I doubt doing it for the ml since cecile was going to attack fl and not ml (and yeah he got hurt but cecile was remorseful about since you know she loves him) anyway that been a long enough tangent about cecile who not even the MC or someone important to the story
Small tangent ml nephew is an unnecessary character and I even forget about his existence
I really like the fl she know what she wants and doesn't fall for ml after he starts being nice to her and start doing the bare minimum at the beginning of the story (tho she can be a bit of a Mary sue at times) I thought that she was going to have her own ml because the current one sucks anyway I wish we have more time with her just seeing her go about see her struggles a bit would be nice to so far she been to perfect other then her daddy issues moving on to that their relationship is interesting tho I think with some communication they be fine he cares and trained her so she could protect herself and be safe in case he couldn't I wonder why she thinks he hate her why would she think that instead of her thinking that she a mere useful pawn to him anyway I hope he plans workout and she lives somewhere nice (I know she going to fold for ml despite the fact she can do so much better)
The ml I dislike a bit he not bad but is to naive and incompetent and I do doubt his love for fl because he moved on to quickly for my taste to fl like he fought his ex fiance a couple times and saw she didn't care and fell in love with fl
Their not much to his personality other then what he is doing with the fl and that he like horses and the because of his father he is an important character I wonder what he did before the fl was he just with cecile because despite his status being high than the fl he knows no one from nobility like where was he did he just spawned with cecile because he doesn't know anything and I know his brother was head of the family but usually both children get educated about nobility rules and important figures in case the older one dies (sad face I know)
And on to the fl dad he may be a side character in status but this is his story everything revolve around him and his future victory (unless they kill him off) his by far one of the most interesting characters he got a lot going for him like how did he be a low ranking noble with out him get caught? Where is his wife now or how did she die? How did the whole kingdom get cursed without him knowing? How come they did just kill him with such power? What he doing know? What his plan to save his kingdom?
Not mention his relationship with the other character fl, ml, other hight noble, random commoners, and underground informant
I feel like I'm sounding sarcastic I'm not he is by far at the center of the story make me wonder why we are following his daughter who could careless about the actual plot and is kind of oblivious like she has and idea of what going on but her plans are still to divorce and move away from her father not solve family and kingdom issues (yat maybe she we) Also does fl got some kind amnesia probably we don't even know when she was born I'm pretty sure her mother was the one to get executed you what I hope I'm wrong about that because imagine your man letting you get executed instead of you I wish there was like a plot twist where it was her mother all along and her dad died it not but it would have been a good plot twist anyway thank for reading my review wether you agreed or disagree or you just need to kill time here take anything for the road