i feel like its bc each chapter is EXTREMELY short that its like nothing is happening
no literally- like at the very least they should’ve gave us some backstory before all of this or some flashbacks that make some sense to how the fl and ml is acting - obviously nothing justifies SA but without anything everyone just looks batshit crazy (espec the fl). + it just becomes hard to read like
Obviously it's fine to feel and share your dismay about whatever, the pace, the writing. I mean I don't get the judgement under these comments either for a story that's just begun. Just why's the author catching a stray for simply not catering to your personal preferences? Since when did stories require a chapter deadline to elaborate on a narrative?
Imo it's silly to tell someone not to build a plot if they don't do it in the way you want it. And generally, there's something to be appreciated when someone says "this story is not for me so far" or "I don't like this author" instead of "the author shouldn't make a story if they're not going to do it the way I like" or "why's the author not doing what I like". It just holds this sense of entitlement, you know?
And how can you know they're not going to expand on the problematic behaviour if this is an ongoing story?
Justification? If you’re going to do a taboo that’s fine but make it actually make sense. Don’t try to build a plot if you’re not going to expand on it past criminal offense on multiple occasions FL is genuinely insane and taking literally everything out on ML for uhhh what was the reason again? EXACTLY! We can be upset that this is essentially going nowhere it’s been 21 chapters