lmao toawf should not even be compared to this lmao , plus at least the na hae soo 's proportion is improving overtime and during the smut scene she got some chubs it's not that unrealistic when we see her naked , that one is 10x worse lmao
Idk if I triggered you but toawf is just as trashy, lmfao. The only difference is that the author I think is more experienced and pushes a slightly better plot but it isn’t much different from the generic toxic smut lol. You can enjoy it but thinking it’s genuine good writing and good art just cause they give her a slightly chub (not even) is crazy. Her proportions are undeniably bad, the only reason why it only got better is probs bc of the backlash at most
It’s a pretty generic toxic straight smut but I believe the author stated it’s one of her first works so I guess for those standards it’s pretty okay. I was actually surprised that the girl actually has a bit more brains, she genuinely tried to break it off with him. She shocked me when she still left and acknowledged that even though it was a misunderstanding that he was with his wife that it didn’t rlly matter because they still had an extremely toxic and unbalanced relationship. It’s just something I don’t often see since the girls are a lot more gullible and most of them would’ve felt guilty and went back immediately but at least at she has a little more backbone than I expected. But this by no means am I saying she’s a great character, def does have the generic y/n sort of personality but it’s def better than other stories. About the proportions, I agree it’s very awkward but unfortunately, this is probably the normal like tears on a withered flower or whatever it’s called. Honestly, if this author marketed the as a horror and psychological, it would’ve been a much better move because it feels that way since I’m reading some of these chapters wondering what’s going to happen to her, I’m not rlly interested in the romantic aspect since that charm was thrown out the window 10 seconds. I’ll probably still read for the plot because I already skipped a bunch of the smut panels.