Ch.4 kinda ruined it for me. I wish he hadn't said he loved Vinny, at the very least I hope it wasn't in a romantic way, though that's what it feels like and that's why I don't like it. It makes it seem like then he didn't actually love Kyle or he was a weird substitude for his brother. It's also just completely unnecessary it was an already tragic death. Also, getting married 5 years after someone you supposedly loved died still seems a bit soon for me. Like, yeah 5 years is kind of enough time but also Kyle is 20-23 years old and he had to move to an entirely unknown place, settle, get over his ex, get over his ex's death, meet someone else, like them, date them, live together, get engaged and then get married in these 5 years. 7 would have felt better for me, but that's obviously a personal preference not actual criticism or anything.
Ch.4 kinda ruined it for me. I wish he hadn't said he loved Vinny, at the very least I hope it wasn't in a romantic way, though that's what it feels like and that's why I don't like it. It makes it seem like then he didn't actually love Kyle or he was a weird substitude for his brother. It's also just completely unnecessary it was an already tragic death.
Also, getting married 5 years after someone you supposedly loved died still seems a bit soon for me. Like, yeah 5 years is kind of enough time but also Kyle is 20-23 years old and he had to move to an entirely unknown place, settle, get over his ex, get over his ex's death, meet someone else, like them, date them, live together, get engaged and then get married in these 5 years. 7 would have felt better for me, but that's obviously a personal preference not actual criticism or anything.