Genuinely wish this was twice as long—it feels like it was super rushed and it had hella potential. To put it into perspective, the pacing and rushing was like trying to condense all the Spider-Man movies into a singular 1hr movie. It would probably still be peak, but you’re left thinking “i want to know more and see more” or “wow i wish that scene was longer”. ╥﹏╥
So much potential—the characters had perfect backstories that would’ve been great to delve deeper into.
Overall i do recommend reading this—despite the rushing, you understand what the author is going for. It’s worthwhile to give this story a shot fr fr
Genuinely wish this was twice as long—it feels like it was super rushed and it had hella potential. To put it into perspective, the pacing and rushing was like trying to condense all the Spider-Man movies into a singular 1hr movie. It would probably still be peak, but you’re left thinking “i want to know more and see more” or “wow i wish that scene was longer”. ╥﹏╥
So much potential—the characters had perfect backstories that would’ve been great to delve deeper into.
Overall i do recommend reading this—despite the rushing, you understand what the author is going for. It’s worthwhile to give this story a shot fr fr