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Art is great and so are the characters, however the pacing is just too fast. Theres not m...

marblefire February 16, 2026 12:13 am

Art is great and so are the characters, however the pacing is just too fast.
Theres not much build up, things are happening right after another - it makes you question how these characters even managed to develop feelings or make choices so quickly and suddenly.
Would've been a great story to tell if it was more fleshed out. Still a nice read but still wish the author took their time with the story.

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    sugaringlychee February 16, 2026 4:09 am

    I agreeee but the author tends to do that with a lot of their stories ;(