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Writing is....Terrible

Kxma February 19, 2026 11:05 pm

I'm 25 chapters in and our MC is r*tarded, other special civil agents catch onto his abilities way faster than he can. The character relationships to our MC feel so synthetic and forced. Especially with Eden and Char. The higher ups villainize or label him immediately with no explanation

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    Kodex February 20, 2026 3:11 am

    Haven’t read it in a fat minute but you’re kinda forgetting everyone has been around those powers for a while and some of em even belong to families with powers so of course they’re gonna catch onto abilities faster. Our mc quite literally had days / weeks to grasp onto an unknown ability while others had years ?? You’re gonna be oblivious too if you one day suddenly develop abilities lol

    Kxma February 20, 2026 9:36 pm

    Even when assessing situations he may find himself in or situations with others, he's slow on the uptake. Very duncy. He's on point sparsely