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Immature Writing

xpfares February 23, 2026 8:25 am

I mean that in a technical not a judgemental way (but also a little judgmental). Slapped together tropes, writing that reminds me of when I'd read bad fan fiction because it was funny. But this is more sincere. Just reads like a 13 year old trying out writing for the first time. Not for me but YMMV.

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