It concluded just fine to me, just wished there were more extra's!
yea I feel ya on it but I wanted a bit more, just that little more to round it out for me. Shorts sometimes are just too short LOL
I did recently think about how authors only have 5 (sometimes 6) chapters to fully portray a full story... A delicate art but one worth trying... <3 Too bad they have to push it all in one volume, you can get cases like this.
yea, it can truly limit so many great stories if even just a few more chapters were included. When I hit a 'total complete I feel it in my soul' short I praise the heck out of it :) (of course personal preferences for each of us on this one) but I so agree with you. The shorter the story the harder the work to make a truly satisfying rounded complete story for us to enjoy. Many are great tho, some just fall a bit short, some we know can be kinda very scary HAHA
This short felt, well, too short. I didn't feel like it wrapped in a satisfying manner, like so much missing to me in this little fast story. It was just ok.