Ah gosh this story was good!! Ughh I feel bad for Lillian thru out the story, like gosh imagine thinking she’s the fake daughter all along and then realizing that she actually was like what a crazy roller coaster of emotions. I feel like the story should have been a little longer tho, sometimes the relationship didn’t feel very genuine cause there wasn’t enough moments to where th relationships could build. But everything else was pretty nice!! Like Lillian had a lot of imposter syndrome which I understood and lowkey kinda didn’t understand why Swan wouldn’t just tell Lillian that she was the real daughter, and I didn’t really understand why swan would look like a mix of the dad and mom. Like she wasn’t even the real daughter, I feel like it would make more sense for her to look like the mom if it changes appearance, just cause it’s the mom’s divine energy. Like while reading it without reading any spoilers, I thought the whole time they were twins (Lillian and Swan) and especially when Lillian’s eyes look just like the dad when she became an adult, and her hair was just a genetic thing (like from distant relative) cause it can happen I had it where a friend had blue eyes and blond from her grandmother when her parents and aunts and uncles had brown hair and eyes. Plus they still didn’t explain how she even ended at the Orphanage or how the temple was able to change that one girl’s appearance. It wasn’t very clear to me, maybe I missed something but those things kinda throw me off while reading the story, but otherwise I loved this story!! Super angsty, I was rooting for Theo and Lillian so glad they ended up together, kinda felt like Swan and Lillian could have ended up together too tho I see some romance happening there. But yeah honestly don’t feel too bad for Damien tho, like knowing his backstory was interesting at the end but ughh I feel like if they took some more time to flesh out all the side characters like Damien, the dad, heck even Theodore, I feel like I’d feel more sympathetic for these characters, especially when we don’t even see clearly what happens to Damien!! but I’m still happy about th story ending!! And interested in more of the authors work
Ah gosh this story was good!! Ughh I feel bad for Lillian thru out the story, like gosh imagine thinking she’s the fake daughter all along and then realizing that she actually was like what a crazy roller coaster of emotions. I feel like the story should have been a little longer tho, sometimes the relationship didn’t feel very genuine cause there wasn’t enough moments to where th relationships could build. But everything else was pretty nice!! Like Lillian had a lot of imposter syndrome which I understood and lowkey kinda didn’t understand why Swan wouldn’t just tell Lillian that she was the real daughter, and I didn’t really understand why swan would look like a mix of the dad and mom. Like she wasn’t even the real daughter, I feel like it would make more sense for her to look like the mom if it changes appearance, just cause it’s the mom’s divine energy. Like while reading it without reading any spoilers, I thought the whole time they were twins (Lillian and Swan) and especially when Lillian’s eyes look just like the dad when she became an adult, and her hair was just a genetic thing (like from distant relative) cause it can happen I had it where a friend had blue eyes and blond from her grandmother when her parents and aunts and uncles had brown hair and eyes. Plus they still didn’t explain how she even ended at the Orphanage or how the temple was able to change that one girl’s appearance. It wasn’t very clear to me, maybe I missed something but those things kinda throw me off while reading the story, but otherwise I loved this story!! Super angsty, I was rooting for Theo and Lillian so glad they ended up together, kinda felt like Swan and Lillian could have ended up together too tho I see some romance happening there. But yeah honestly don’t feel too bad for Damien tho, like knowing his backstory was interesting at the end but ughh I feel like if they took some more time to flesh out all the side characters like Damien, the dad, heck even Theodore, I feel like I’d feel more sympathetic for these characters, especially when we don’t even see clearly what happens to Damien!! but I’m still happy about th story ending!! And interested in more of the authors work