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4/10

Jean n em OHHH March 3, 2026 11:22 pm

This isn’t good, not worth the read. Everything happened so fast, not a fan of love at first sight troupe, and she’s a terrible person let’s be honest. Awful friend and just a very flat character. Writing could be better, art isn’t awful so I put up with it as long as possible but I’m dropping it after she handled the granny ordeal the way she did. Okay bye

Responses
    Poinee April 11, 2026 5:12 pm

    Exactly, fl’s responses and actions are doesn’t have a shred of integrity. Things are happening in a too out of logic way. I know in this kind of stories there is not much world building but even the story unfolds unnaturally. How can she lead such a merchant guild when she is neither smart nor can conduct herself as a noble in that kind of society? Also it really feels like a supporting character’s story that was written in passing of a break.