Sorry, guys! During system maintenance, some functions like comment are unavailable.

Review

Bunni March 4, 2026 4:58 pm

Look, we knew from the beginning they would get back together. It's ok if you don't like that.
But honestly as someone that read this all in one day.
It is actually pretty good. The ending is not a cookie cutter ending. Bc it's different it's going to feel disappointing.
I like that they communicate towards the end. This was always a fantasy story so it's not going to be the same with modern day morals.

It was original, the art is beautiful and fun, and we need more stories that don't follow a cookie cutter route.

Responses
    TypeS March 11, 2026 1:05 pm

    You can try to pretend a bad ending is novel and new if you want. It simply sucks and is bad writing. The ML is a genocidal, homicidal dipshit and he's quickly and magically forgiven with no consequences at all. You're putting a bow on a turd

    Bunni March 11, 2026 1:10 pm

    Hilarious you have me blocked(? Weird since this is the first time I've encountered you) yet can't help but trash my opinion.
    No consequences?? Quickly forgiven??
    Did you read this at all?
    You can dislike it but I'm allowed to like a piece of fiction :)
    You do realize that killing was common back then?
    And that this is a fantasy setting?
    It's not a bad ending or bad writing, it's just an ending YOU didn't like.
    You're allowed to not like something in the same way I'm allowed to like something.
    Grow up kid lol

    TypeS March 11, 2026 1:14 pm
    Hilarious you have me blocked(? Weird since this is the first time I've encountered you) yet can't help but trash my opinion. No consequences?? Quickly forgiven?? Did you read this at all? You can dislike it bu... Bunni

    Oh you're one of those morons who cries about "this was common back then" (genocidal rages and homicide?! Lmfaoooo) in a FANTASY, not even historical. Brain rotten child Your opinion sucks and so does this story.

    Bunni March 11, 2026 1:35 pm

    And that's your opinion :)
    Doesn't make yours any more important or right than mine.
    Yes genocide and homicide were common back then, it's a historical fantasy. So it has both.

    If he truly was genocidal why at the ending did he form alliances with Vycans group? Why did he fight the dragon and take all the curse onto himself?
    There was also a ten year time gap from them going into the gem and getting out. As well as other time gaps.
    Ten years being sealed on a giant crystal is literally a consequence too btw.
    I do think they could have shown us more of his changes but I do like what we got.

    He fought other groups as a ruler who was trying to take care of his kingdom.
    Were some of his actions not morally right? Not really, but he was doing what he was groomed to do as a ruler. Even I think he took some stuff too far.
    But we see him grow and change and do what's right in the end.
    Our FL would have left if he hadn't changed.

    We're even seeing a "what if" situation where she doesn't pick him and look at that... He let her leave!
    Is that a homicidal maniac to you?

    Again, you are well within your right to not like this story or it's ending, but harassing and insulting those that do like this?
    Doesn't make you a good person lol.
    It just makes you weird and obsessive.
    Forcing someone to have the same opinion as you and getting mad when they don't, is actually "brain rotten" behavior.
    Sorry you didn't like it!
    But I did :) I hope we get more side stories with them and the kids.
    If you keep going I'm just going to block you back lol.