Glad I wasn't the only one feeling this way. Everything was so fake and wasn't flowing naturally at all. The third character entry was so meaningless and that jealousy scene came out of nowhere. Even the appendix incident felt so unnecessary.
Holy hell because same. It was hard to finish and fell flat.
Yup, you described it well for me too....the flow was not natural and I felt it reading it, kinda put me off the whole of it. Neat ya felt it also :)
Yep, fell flat, you felt it also lol. It was hard to finish! But we got thru it HA
I didn't connect with the story. Seems too fake to me LOL Like I don't know, the speed of the marriage of convenience etc just didn't track well with me kinda. Art was nice, story less than for me but overall a fast ok read.