Responses
Ofc it doesn't flow well. The story is in MC' pov who has a mental problem. His narration can't be reliable at all. In this type of manhwa, the readers gotta analyse a little, not just swallow everything from MC.
I get the MC part, I think my problem with flow was more on events pacing and the surrounding characters overall. Maybe it'll sit better with me when I'll read after it's completed
Usually with this kind of pacing it's rated 9 or below? The premise is really interesting and I'm very curious but somewhat situations or interactions just don't flow well :/