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the side couple(s) had reasons to be included in the story, (scott is the bridge between brett and hayden) but they weren't very well integrated into the story as characters, which is where they fall flat and unloved by many readers. it's unfortunate because I can see the thought process behind them and how they work with the ideas the creator is exploring, but managing multiple characters and story threads is a skill this creator could use some work on.
After finishing this manhwa from manhuarmtl. I gotta say, the manhwa has a lot of half-baked threads of side plots. Like the second couple's story was very underdeveloped. The love triangle and sudden pregnancy feels sped through and done off screen. We didn't even get a proper introduction to the couple, its no wonder no one likes them! They're actually a waste of space.
Then there's Brett's brother, who they mention a lot in the beginning. Not much happened with him. Then there's the old omega actor? His history and current love drama. The secretary's history. I also feel like I barely learnt much on Brett's family, who seemed important but welp.
I did like the main couple, I just think there's a lot of random side stuff added into the story for no reason? Like why even bring up some stuff that's never going to be developed.