As much as I loved this story, the writing in the first 15 chapters was so jumpy and didnt flow well at all. Then they finally figured out how to slow down and build suspense just to nuke the main villans plan before she even had time to do anything. THEN HERE COMES MIRROR BROTHER he had zero plans or a reason to come out of the mirror and it was never explained how he ended up there in the first place. OR why he has powers that have some how spread to the top 2 major families for generations. The only thing saving this is how strong the FL is and her relationship with the guild and Ray
As much as I loved this story, the writing in the first 15 chapters was so jumpy and didnt flow well at all. Then they finally figured out how to slow down and build suspense just to nuke the main villans plan before she even had time to do anything. THEN HERE COMES MIRROR BROTHER he had zero plans or a reason to come out of the mirror and it was never explained how he ended up there in the first place. OR why he has powers that have some how spread to the top 2 major families for generations. The only thing saving this is how strong the FL is and her relationship with the guild and Ray