art is super nice but the story is very surface level. a lot of it don't really make sense. ML's obsession with FL makes no sense to me and how he fell for her fast, their interactions seem kind of bland to me. FL I fear overreacts a lot and is super sensitive like when ML does something that isn't even that deep and she tells him off. also... she was so cruel to the ogML, like yeah he was selfish but the revenge i fear was so irrational. honestly the main couple are pretty irrational behind their motives, it just seems like everything just goes to plan no matter what.
i do really like ML's sister and her friendship with the FL!! i just wish there was more explanation and rationale behind the characters' motives. interesting read though
I feel the same way as you, i can't help but feel sorry for the og ML. He's already twisted because his father, and fl suddenly being cruel to him. He probably develop BPD at this point
I feel the same way as you, i can't help but feel sorry for the og ML. He's already twisted because his father, and fl suddenly being cruel to him. He probably develop BPD at this point Lettuce
i know like ogML wasn't even that evil he was just obsessive. she did NOT have to go that far
art is super nice but the story is very surface level. a lot of it don't really make sense. ML's obsession with FL makes no sense to me and how he fell for her fast, their interactions seem kind of bland to me. FL I fear overreacts a lot and is super sensitive like when ML does something that isn't even that deep and she tells him off. also... she was so cruel to the ogML, like yeah he was selfish but the revenge i fear was so irrational. honestly the main couple are pretty irrational behind their motives, it just seems like everything just goes to plan no matter what.
i do really like ML's sister and her friendship with the FL!! i just wish there was more explanation and rationale behind the characters' motives. interesting read though