I get you there is definitely room for improvement,, like if they got vol 2 and explained a little bit more about the top's personality or we get to learn about him more it would have been better,, atp it feels like he desperately wanted someone and started dating him but at the same point you see him put efforts also but it kinda lacks something
So agree....the story is there ya know but like you mentioned that bit of lacking just makes me want more depth in a way. But 6 chaps really is short, I do applaud the effort cause I know I couldn't do it this well lol (I really like to connect to the characters I read in some good fashion, it makes a diff to me on how I perceive the story too)

It's just ok for me on this one but I didn't that feel from the ML that he was really that drawn to guys and would just pick up with this coworker so easily, like the author just leaves him hanging out there with, divorced over 10 yrs, been with nobody....ok will just hookup with this guy?? It's ok ig but I didn't feel much from this one kinda (just me on it, characters didn't have enough depth)