Good. Agree with comments that I didn't feel real passion between them, it did feel like it was lacking in the bond/chem area of them building a real relationship. Need a few more chapters to show some real emotions/affection and maybe a few chaps of them as a solid couple in the future to cement this story as complete for me. I liked the mains, the abuse issue and other issues were written well kinda but overall it left me feeling so much more was needed. I enjoyed it tho!! Art is nice. In contents there is an 'afterward' chap but it is missing from the upload so? Would have been nice to have a bit more in this story and it might have helped round it out? idk, a lot of times these shorts are too damn short :)
Good. Agree with comments that I didn't feel real passion between them, it did feel like it was lacking in the bond/chem area of them building a real relationship. Need a few more chapters to show some real emotions/affection and maybe a few chaps of them as a solid couple in the future to cement this story as complete for me. I liked the mains, the abuse issue and other issues were written well kinda but overall it left me feeling so much more was needed. I enjoyed it tho!! Art is nice. In contents there is an 'afterward' chap but it is missing from the upload so? Would have been nice to have a bit more in this story and it might have helped round it out? idk, a lot of times these shorts are too damn short :)