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The story is interesting, but artist lacks some skills in storytelling. Everything feels a...

fraudummheit March 23, 2026 9:29 pm

The story is interesting, but artist lacks some skills in storytelling. Everything feels a bit stuff and unnatural. I hope it will get better

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    peach March 29, 2026 4:24 pm

    agree

    Romi March 30, 2026 7:08 am

    I don't think it's meant to be revealed straightforwardly. It's a mystery and doesn't tell the readers immediately what the story is. Slowly revealing bits of lore. Just have patience and connect it all back. Me personally I like the storyflow. The edging and all

    fraudummheit March 30, 2026 6:38 pm
    I don't think it's meant to be revealed straightforwardly. It's a mystery and doesn't tell the readers immediately what the story is. Slowly revealing bits of lore. Just have patience and connect it all back. M... Romi

    I mean more about storytelling in each frame. Frames feel not alive. But it is getting better