The ending was really abrupt but I really liked this story. I can’t believe the only difference between the previous story line and this one was the fact that someone finally talked to Aster properly. Who woulda thought? (But also her being his knight in shining armor was also a point). I will say, I don’t like when stories use bl but make it straight. Like at least that commander captain guy was gay…he literally actually liked fl’s brother and the only thing that changed was fl’s personality and suddenly he’s interested in her instead. Aster not being gay makes sense, dude was in it for the torture and from what can be understood he only was obsessed with his cousin(?) because of the idea of a knight in shining armor that he fit pretty well. Other than that, I liked Aster and Kayla’s relationship. It came about really weirdly on Kayla’s side but Aster’s adorable to me, so I’m sure that was a driving factor for Kayla as well.
(Also fun fact: i’m gonna try to be commenting on all the stories I read because I’m worried about another reset happening. At least the comments remain even if the reading lists disappear…mine still haven’t come back)
The ending was really abrupt but I really liked this story. I can’t believe the only difference between the previous story line and this one was the fact that someone finally talked to Aster properly. Who woulda thought? (But also her being his knight in shining armor was also a point). I will say, I don’t like when stories use bl but make it straight. Like at least that commander captain guy was gay…he literally actually liked fl’s brother and the only thing that changed was fl’s personality and suddenly he’s interested in her instead. Aster not being gay makes sense, dude was in it for the torture and from what can be understood he only was obsessed with his cousin(?) because of the idea of a knight in shining armor that he fit pretty well. Other than that, I liked Aster and Kayla’s relationship. It came about really weirdly on Kayla’s side but Aster’s adorable to me, so I’m sure that was a driving factor for Kayla as well.
(Also fun fact: i’m gonna try to be commenting on all the stories I read because I’m worried about another reset happening. At least the comments remain even if the reading lists disappear…mine still haven’t come back)