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I AGREE, especially with the flow of each page, felt like it could use add more drawings to show the emotions being used and could add more dept to it lamaw, artstyle was cute tho hwhehe i like it
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I AGREE, especially with the flow of each page, felt like it could use add more drawings to show the emotions being used and could add more dept to it lamaw, artstyle was cute tho hwhehe i like it
It’s the kind of story I will most likely reread because overall it was good and the drawings are really nice, I also like the premise of the story and the twists in it. But here’s the thing, the foreshadowing is almost none existent / poor planning. Some important elements for the plots appear very late and so it seems like it was more of a last minute solution, which is a shame. I wish we’d have some bonus scenes as well. Still, overall, I had no problem reading this