I really did love this story, it was genuinely like a breath of fresh air because of omegaverse slop that comes out all the time. Finally the couple isn’t toxic in the slightest and they actually have conversations about feelings and underlying emotions. I absolutely love the main couple and I wish they had more chapters of them being together and like them going on vacation. However my only criticism is that I really dislike the side couple. I understand the point of the side couple is to show change in a partner and how that can better a relationship bud I honestly think that the alpha was an awful person and didn’t even love the omega in the slightest. It was only like 5 chapters but from all I saw was the guy using him simply for a child or just to be wedded for business. I’m annoyed that the omega didn’t just leave and raise the baby on his own because he was basically going back to his abuser. Not to mention if they do get back together they probably still have to deal with the insane mother in law, it just seemed like a off decision to make them rekindle the relationship when it was abusive from the beginning. By making the omega leave the alpha abuser it would show that omegas don’t NEED alphas to survive and that the omega was stronger than his past feelings for his lover but by making them get back together it just shows that alpha and omegas DEPEND on eachother to live ://
I really did love this story, it was genuinely like a breath of fresh air because of omegaverse slop that comes out all the time. Finally the couple isn’t toxic in the slightest and they actually have conversations about feelings and underlying emotions. I absolutely love the main couple and I wish they had more chapters of them being together and like them going on vacation. However my only criticism is that I really dislike the side couple. I understand the point of the side couple is to show change in a partner and how that can better a relationship bud I honestly think that the alpha was an awful person and didn’t even love the omega in the slightest. It was only like 5 chapters but from all I saw was the guy using him simply for a child or just to be wedded for business. I’m annoyed that the omega didn’t just leave and raise the baby on his own because he was basically going back to his abuser. Not to mention if they do get back together they probably still have to deal with the insane mother in law, it just seemed like a off decision to make them rekindle the relationship when it was abusive from the beginning. By making the omega leave the alpha abuser it would show that omegas don’t NEED alphas to survive and that the omega was stronger than his past feelings for his lover but by making them get back together it just shows that alpha and omegas DEPEND on eachother to live ://