beta
they’re cute and i’m ngl I wasn’t really interested in their relationship at all. Idk, the whole distance thing didn’t do much for me and I was honestly more worried about huis health then whatever mc was going though. At the end of the day the art was beautiful and the story was fine but just maybe too bland for me. I also can’t stand when they refuse to listen to each other
honestly I really liked this story but it definitely needs a lot of work. (in hindsight it’s slop but i still kinda liked it) Since it’s so short it allows a lot of plot holes to happen. The language was strange and on god it was corny... I lowkey blame translation tbh. But besides that I actually love them sm. I loveeee the dynamic & character designs but I honestly wish that this story was longer to give more context on everything and allow more tension to be there. I mean the fight didn’t even stir emotion in me because we only knew about them for like 6 chapters im crying. But anyway there so very cute but this story def needs more work & love </3