I genuinely thought this was going to be super toxic but was pleasantly surprised on how it wasn’t. The characters were interesting at most but I didnt particularly like the character designs the small uke and large top always irks me. Anyway the plot twist genuinely gobbsmacked me it wasn’t something i was expecting it definitely drove the story for me. Because unfortunately without the interesting plot I would’ve dropped it.
I thought the story was actually really good I loved the art and the action but the only part that irked me we how much felix got like sexually assaulted like bro was it really necessary for him to be sexualized every few minutes it was just odd. Ofc he is attractive but good god. Anyway I feel like this needs to be longer bruh
I kept trying to finish this but I genuinely can’t because I don’t even like the main couple they are insufferable. Top has been mysterious for 60 chapters and I’m soooo over it. And I know the bottom is supposed to be a pushover but instead of being cute it got so much more annoying over time. i tried to thug it out to see what the ss dungeon was for but i’m overly irritated i’m not wasting anymore of my time. It was really interesting in the beginning but fell off at like chapter 20 or something i don’t remember
overall I thought the story was cute but just maybe not my taste. as much as I liked it I thought a lot of the scenes were corny lmao. Idk I just think it was a little repetitive with the top losing control and mc being there to comfort him. I mostly kept readying for youngbae bc he’s bad AFFF i was hoping he would get a side story but he has a wife and kid so shrug.
as much as I loved this story I felt it revolved around drama with derek as a contrast to their relationship, i mean like we only saw them go on like 1 date, i just felt like throughout the 60 chapters we weren’t getting a lot of relationship insight and more of other stuff. Of course I did love it overall I just wish we saw more of like luke and andrew being together.. which I hope comes in the side story
yeahhhh
I really did love this story, it was genuinely like a breath of fresh air because of omegaverse slop that comes out all the time. Finally the couple isn’t toxic in the slightest and they actually have conversations about feelings and underlying emotions. I absolutely love the main couple and I wish they had more chapters of them being together and like them going on vacation. However my only criticism is that I really dislike the side couple. I understand the point of the side couple is to show change in a partner and how that can better a relationship bud I honestly think that the alpha was an awful person and didn’t even love the omega in the slightest. It was only like 5 chapters but from all I saw was the guy using him simply for a child or just to be wedded for business. I’m annoyed that the omega didn’t just leave and raise the baby on his own because he was basically going back to his abuser. Not to mention if they do get back together they probably still have to deal with the insane mother in law, it just seemed like a off decision to make them rekindle the relationship when it was abusive from the beginning. By making the omega leave the alpha abuser it would show that omegas don’t NEED alphas to survive and that the omega was stronger than his past feelings for his lover but by making them get back together it just shows that alpha and omegas DEPEND on eachother to live ://
totally off topic.. is this not the reincarnation of Tobio Kageyama and Hinata shoyo—my goats?
i really need to stop taking reccs from tt because I thought this was a beta x alpha story but the mf beta turns into an omega! I’m so fed up with omegaverses doing that all the time not everything needs to be alpha x omega omfg, god forbid i want an ACTUAL alpha x beta. The characters are flat af, they’re boring dude. All they’ve done for the past 17 chapters is goon over eachother and that’s fine in concept except there’s nothing to their personalities. Alpha is uptight and madly in love with brother and omega is in love with alpha like ok.. what else?? The characters just seems unlikeable to me I don’t like anyone really. Idk I’m not only bored with this story but I just really dislike it due to how weird their intimate scenes plays out..
have you read beta no love zone?
sorry, its exclusive no-love zone
I don’t think I have, I’ll look into it! Thanks for the suggestion <33
get back to me when u finish
Okay, I finally finished it!! And it so happens is that I did read it before but it was a long time ago, so I wanted to reread it. I absolutely loved the main couple they are so cute and it’s honestly a breath of fresh air from all the other omegaverse stories cause they actually communicate and have a healthy relationship overall!!
While you were sleeping has a betaxalpha side couple
Wait no itd While You werent Watching
thx! I’ll check it out!
have you read "Isn't It Beta?" it's a short story so its pretty rushed but theyre both betas lol
IM IN AGONY MY FAVS WHY DOES THIS STORY HAVE TO END THIS IS ACTUAL LIVE TORTURE PLEASE I CANT GO WITHOUT MORE NOURISHMENT. THIS STORY IS SO PEAK GIVE ME 100 MORE CHAPTERS PLEASEEEE
In my opinion the second couple was wayyy more interesting than the main one. Since they had broken up from the start and was getting back together, it just wasn’t interesting to me compared to—two people developing feelings because of circumstances. Not only that, it’s just the main couples character designs just weren’t my taste and I didn’t like the dynamic as much, not to mention the weird sa and overly obsessiveness like hello?? ngl i skipped all of their scenes and just read the side couple. I just thought they were overall more interesting and had a better story plot.