honestly I really liked this story but it definitely needs a lot of work. (in hindsight it’s slop but i still kinda liked it) Since it’s so short it allows a lot of plot holes to happen. The language was strange and on god it was corny... I lowkey blame translation tbh. But besides that I actually love them sm. I loveeee the dynamic & character designs but I honestly wish that this story was longer to give more context on everything and allow more tension to be there. I mean the fight didn’t even stir emotion in me because we only knew about them for like 6 chapters im crying. But anyway there so very cute but this story def needs more work & love </3
honestly I really liked this story but it definitely needs a lot of work. (in hindsight it’s slop but i still kinda liked it) Since it’s so short it allows a lot of plot holes to happen. The language was strange and on god it was corny... I lowkey blame translation tbh. But besides that I actually love them sm. I loveeee the dynamic & character designs but I honestly wish that this story was longer to give more context on everything and allow more tension to be there. I mean the fight didn’t even stir emotion in me because we only knew about them for like 6 chapters im crying. But anyway there so very cute but this story def needs more work & love </3