this story had so much more potential but it feels like it was written by someone really young or inexperienced. things just kind of happened and there wasn't a lot of thought behind the characters actions. it feels like it needs to be fleshed out more or rewritten completely. i liked the premise but the execution was a bit lackluster and everything felt a bit too simplistic. the art is really nice tho and after finishing it i can say i liked the story overall too, it's just the way it progressed that made me feel like i was reading something off wattpad lol
this story had so much more potential but it feels like it was written by someone really young or inexperienced. things just kind of happened and there wasn't a lot of thought behind the characters actions. it feels like it needs to be fleshed out more or rewritten completely. i liked the premise but the execution was a bit lackluster and everything felt a bit too simplistic. the art is really nice tho and after finishing it i can say i liked the story overall too, it's just the way it progressed that made me feel like i was reading something off wattpad lol
5/10