I'll preface this by saying that I'm not usually a fan of the whole "smut for the sake of smut" type of stories. That being said, the premise of this story sounded pretty intriguing, so I decided to give it a shot. After reading what was available, I'd have to say, I'm a bit disappointed they didn't do more with it.
My personal feedback: This is just basic, unremarkable porn. The central idea of this story seemed pretty promising, and could have been fleash out to make a pretty decent story.
I'll preface this by saying that I'm not usually a fan of the whole "smut for the sake of smut" type of stories. That being said, the premise of this story sounded pretty intriguing, so I decided to give it a shot.
After reading what was available, I'd have to say, I'm a bit disappointed they didn't do more with it.
My personal feedback:
This is just basic, unremarkable porn.
The central idea of this story seemed pretty promising, and could have been fleash out to make a pretty decent story.