I’m not too great with words so hopefully what I’m saying makes sense. And if someone who feels the same can word it better that would be even better.
As someone who read all of the chapters at once, I like the story, but it frustrates me a little because somehow Mi-Ae’s feelings compared to Cheol’s feels kind of unbalanced. Which doesn’t make sense cause she likes him just as much but it feels unbalanced for some reason. That’s why I’m wondering if it’s the execution of a lot of their conflicts?
I think if you read the story all at once Cheol is constantly made to be jealous. While Mi-Ae only has small moments of it and anytime she does, it’s quickly balanced by him being made to feel jealous again. Also the guys who make Cheol jealous are important characters who have faces and names while the girl who made Mi-Ae jealous doesn’t even have a face or a name.
It just feels a little one-sided in regards to which main character is getting tortured and constantly having to prove their feelings.
They both have their pride but Mi-Ae is usually able to keep her intact and have the upper hand during most of their conflicts I feel like. So it feels a little one-sided.
I’m not too great with words so hopefully what I’m saying makes sense. And if someone who feels the same can word it better that would be even better.
As someone who read all of the chapters at once, I like the story, but it frustrates me a little because somehow Mi-Ae’s feelings compared to Cheol’s feels kind of unbalanced. Which doesn’t make sense cause she likes him just as much but it feels unbalanced for some reason. That’s why I’m wondering if it’s the execution of a lot of their conflicts?
I think if you read the story all at once Cheol is constantly made to be jealous. While Mi-Ae only has small moments of it and anytime she does, it’s quickly balanced by him being made to feel jealous again. Also the guys who make Cheol jealous are important characters who have faces and names while the girl who made Mi-Ae jealous doesn’t even have a face or a name.
It just feels a little one-sided in regards to which main character is getting tortured and constantly having to prove their feelings.
They both have their pride but Mi-Ae is usually able to keep her intact and have the upper hand during most of their conflicts I feel like. So it feels a little one-sided.