The story had a great start...kind of. I love the dramatics and trauma they put her through but their reasonings for kicking her out felt stupid the entire time. I kept imagining myself in their shoes. Like what would I do if I raised a child that wasn't mine, only to have another child come forward claiming to be mine. And at the end of the day, I would love the child I raised more than the child that came out of nowhere. I also understand there might be jealousy between them and I wouldn't kick my kid out for bullying the other one. That's when you ground them or tell them to start acting their age...I mean, they were like 20 right? The pointing fingers, crying, and tattling to daddy and big brother all felt super childish. Like at least make them 15-16 if you're gonna do that. On top of everything, the company she establishes to "get revenge" felt stupid. Like...how is that revenge? It felt like a very boring and long part of the story that wasn't necessary. In the end her medicine wasn't even used for any plot point of revenge.
The story had a great start...kind of. I love the dramatics and trauma they put her through but their reasonings for kicking her out felt stupid the entire time. I kept imagining myself in their shoes. Like what would I do if I raised a child that wasn't mine, only to have another child come forward claiming to be mine. And at the end of the day, I would love the child I raised more than the child that came out of nowhere. I also understand there might be jealousy between them and I wouldn't kick my kid out for bullying the other one. That's when you ground them or tell them to start acting their age...I mean, they were like 20 right? The pointing fingers, crying, and tattling to daddy and big brother all felt super childish. Like at least make them 15-16 if you're gonna do that. On top of everything, the company she establishes to "get revenge" felt stupid. Like...how is that revenge? It felt like a very boring and long part of the story that wasn't necessary. In the end her medicine wasn't even used for any plot point of revenge.