Good! I loved it. The dynamics of how the astronomy club gets thrown out of whack when 3 newbies join....it was a wild fun ride :) A lot of hater comments on certain characters but the only one that is unsatisfying to me is Ondera and Hayamata....they still have an issue from childhood between them and it wasn't resolved enough for me, and it ended with them abruptly but darn I liked how this story unfolded. It gave me whiplash who is gonna end up with whom and I like stories like that and it being so short, it packed a punch I enjoyed!! Nice work.
Good! I loved it. The dynamics of how the astronomy club gets thrown out of whack when 3 newbies join....it was a wild fun ride :) A lot of hater comments on certain characters but the only one that is unsatisfying to me is Ondera and Hayamata....they still have an issue from childhood between them and it wasn't resolved enough for me, and it ended with them abruptly but darn I liked how this story unfolded. It gave me whiplash who is gonna end up with whom and I like stories like that and it being so short, it packed a punch I enjoyed!! Nice work.