The plot is a little silly, and there are still things that weren't clarified between mc and ml, especially their huge misunderstanding when he confesed. Mc is a little gullible for easily accepting the marriage but considering the fact that its a short story I guess its fine..
It would've been amazing if the author made it a full pledge story though, I can see it working out!
I really liked the story and their dynamic in a way, but it's so short and rushed that its kinda disappointing? I hope the bonuses make up for the gaps in the story...
The plot is a little silly, and there are still things that weren't clarified between mc and ml, especially their huge misunderstanding when he confesed. Mc is a little gullible for easily accepting the marriage but considering the fact that its a short story I guess its fine..
It would've been amazing if the author made it a full pledge story though, I can see it working out!
I really liked the story and their dynamic in a way, but it's so short and rushed that its kinda disappointing? I hope the bonuses make up for the gaps in the story...