what changes would make it better?
It was too rushed, but mostly the lines. Dan saying he couldn't help with his Jinx or Jaekyung saying you're dying, don't die, what did you do to deserve this... I was very into it, but those lines made it less serious. The expressions were on point tho
I agree, it feels rushed, but I'm okay with the content, I just wish mingwa would be more experimental with their compositions and paneling. right now it feels like they're actors on a set, placed in front of the camera and not like a window into a universe, so it's not very engaging, dialogues like that feel so cookie-cutter when presented like this
mingwa did this really well with chapter 95 when they're expressing their feelings, i think the paneling and pacing fit so well, perhaps in the most recent chapter they were trying t o wrap up a plot point too quickly
The whole stabbing scene was very poorly executed and the dialogs were incoherent with the situation, almost idiotic. I didn't like it at all