I very much agree. This felt really weird to me and I came here from a hentai/josei list for women. I don't really appreciate the constantly conspicuous outline of her humongous bazookas during fight scenes. I also feel especially uncomfortable with the strong focus on her sexual appeal when she's only a high school student. It feels weird and somewhat despicable to draw such exaggerated proportions of her breasts and hips in her high school uniform. No high school girl should be looked at like that.
I also came from a josei list that rated this 5/5 but noped out asap. Adding on to your point its just nonconsesual/r4pey especially involving highschoolers with big boobs but i guess based on the comments the sex scenes saved it i really wish or hope younger people that read this doesnt think that huge power imbalances and dubious consent isnt okay in a relationship/partnership

Maybe it's just me but this felt very male gaze. like 80% of it is just focused on her face, body, and her in sexual positions. There was MORE pov from the ML than any pov from the FL. Feels like this artist is used to drawing male gaze stuff and tried to create a 'josei' smut but I can tell lol. Why do many bj scenes focused on her face...everytime I see shit like this I just go back to yaoi
I've read many other Josei that do a much better job at being femgaze. Heck I've read a hentai that is meant to be for men that somehow felt more femgaze