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A few more chapters could’ve made this better

CelestialAsteria April 26, 2026 5:56 am

More chapters and the mc dating around could have made a difference. Liked the ml cried and begged but it was necessary to see that more lol. Maybe a few more dates where he asks for forgiveness and dotes on the mc to feel that devotion more?

I have read bls where the ml was a player but fell for the mc harder and was surprised by it written better. I guess because we didn’t have the ml’s perspective more in this one? I don’t know

The biting smut was fun though

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    Uwusaur May 1, 2026 12:56 pm

    I agree. It was satisfying when the mc distanced himself. Needed more of that lol.

    CelestialAsteria May 2, 2026 7:53 pm
    I agree. It was satisfying when the mc distanced himself. Needed more of that lol. Uwusaur

    Especially since he saw himself as average but he had two people interested in him! I wanted him to at least build up his self esteem before they got together again.